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Not one hundred percent happy with this chapter. For those who care, I might run off at the gums about why, but it basically boils down to eventually deciding to not stress so hard about making this an important moment after spending a lot of time stressing about exactly that. Sigh. Previous chapters here.


Chapter Nine


"Angel," Buffy breathed.

And there he was. Tall, dark, and agelessly handsome. Dressed in black. Standing by the side of his shiny red car like a knight just descended from his horse. Angel.

She hadn't expected him to arrive so fast. Like a genie summoned from a bottle, he was just there.

Buffy's eyes widened. Oh. Here. Angel was here. With Spike. With her... oh, god.

She hadn't thought about that at all when she'd called. When Spike had told her to call--what had he been thinking? They'd just needed help, and she hadn't wanted to argue about it. And now--

This was it. The first time that she and Angel and Spike were all together in one place. This was a moment. Her heartbeat accelerated.

She'd avoided this in Sunnydale. Put it off, sent Angel home rather than deal with it, with their egos. Gee, how about I take the two most important men in my life and watch them tear each other apart as a warm-up to the apocalypse? No thank you. Angel's reaction to Riley had been bad enough. Spike would have sparked off World War Three, and no way did she have time for that, the two of them posturing and preening like chest-beating gorillas. Especially not back when she had no idea, really, what she was going to say to either of them about the other--it was just... way too complicated. She could make jokes about them wrestling in oil--and okay, that was a pretty nice mental picture--but those only become funny after she'd dodged that particular bullet.

Buffy tensed, and shot a nervous look at Spike. He was still standing a couple of paces away, not looking at her, and she experienced a moment of nauseous indecision as Angel slammed the car door shut and walked around the Lamborghini, leather coat flaring. Should I go stand by Spike and help him? Or would he hate that in front of Angel, think it made him look weak or something? Only... well, he is weak right now--what should I do?

"Buffy."

Buffy blinked. She'd zoned out for a second, hadn't seen Angel approach, and now he was right in front of her. The three of them formed a little triangle in the middle of the dimly lit street.

Angel gave her a single nod in greeting along with her name. Buffy lifted her own chin and nodded back. "Angel."

Angel pursed his lips, and shifted his gaze immediately to Spike. "Spike," he said. Another nod. "Mind telling me what happened here?"

"What's it look like, gramps?" Spike croaked, eyes on the pavement. Without Buffy's arm around him for support, he'd balanced himself on his feet in a slightly knocked-kneed pose, like an extra from Night of the Living Dead. "Runnin' on empty here. Been trapped in another dimension without so much as a boy scout kit." Just the effort of speaking made him sway unsteadily.

Angel's arm shot out; he grabbed Spike by one shoulder to steady him. "Could've guessed that just by looking at you. How'd it happen? Demon fight?"

"Uh, no, that was my fault," Buffy cut in, waved a hand. "We were talking, and... got kinda distracted."

Angel shot Spike a look. "Distracted."

"Not that kind of distracted," Spike mumbled. "Just... talking."

"At sunrise. And you what, forgot that day follows night?" he said. "You know you've had a hundred years to get used to that."

"Um, can we do this later?" Buffy interjected. "Angel, please, right now--" She blew out a sigh. "Can you help?" Us, she wanted to say. Can you help us? She stepped forward and slid an arm around Spike's waist, pushed him upright with a hand on his stomach. Now she and Angel were standing on opposite sides of Spike, both helping to buoy him up.

Angel nodded. "Let's get you both in the car. I brought plenty of blood along. Nothing wrong with him that won't fix."

Spike snorted something unintelligible from between them. His head hung low, like a boxer who'd been K.O.ed.

"Are you sure? I mean, he's been kind of... out of it." Buffy met Angel's eyes over the top of Spike's head.

"Well," Angel said, lips quirking in a smile. "There is the possibility of brain damage, if you go too long without blood. Not that it'd be easy to tell on brain trust here--"

"Hey!" Spike said faintly.

"Brain damage?" Buffy repeated.

"Ah, I wouldn't worry. From the looks of it, he couldn't have been in there more than a year or two."

"Says you," Spike mumbled from between them. "Felt like... a lot longer than that."

"You'll live." Angel repositioned his grip, slung an arm around Spike's back and lifted him off his feet. Buffy nearly stumbled, off balance, her own arms suddenly empty.

Spike let his head fall back, curly hair draped over Angel's leather-clad arm. "Oh, right," he said thickly, regarding Angel through unfocused eyes. "You're the expert. Your... hunn'erd years in a hell dimension. How'd you know it was a hunn'erd years anyway? Bring a digital watch?"

"Can we just... Angel, can we just get on with this?" Buffy was starting to feel a little frantic. Spike was in no shape to be trading insults with Angel, and she felt oddly out of place, unable to really get a word in. The situation was slipping out of her control.

"It's okay, Buffy. Don't worry." One-handed, Angel opened up the Lamborghini's passenger door and--none too gently--began to stuff Spike into the seat.

Alarmed, Buffy pushed herself forward, tried to wedge herself in between them.

"Get your paws off me, you big oaf!" Spike was cursing and struggling. He seemed to be having some issue with the seatbelt, namely not wanting it around him. Angel had a hand on Spike's chest, pinning him against the seat, while he tried to strap in the struggling body with his other hand.

"Quit wiggling around, you idiot!" Angel said.

"I can do it myself, lay off," Spike barked.

"Spike, stop--you're gonna hurt yourself--Angel, quit doing that, would you both just stop?" Buffy squeezed herself under Angel's outstretched arms, her small shoulders pushing Angel's much larger frame aside. The space inside the car was close--all gleaming leather and glowing instrument panels and Spike's blue eyes and blood-stained mouth right in front of her as she hovered over him, her hands falling onto his shoulders. He stilled immediately.

"Please, let's just get through this," she breathed, just loud enough for Spike to hear while her hands searched his body for the seatbelt clasp. She buckled it closed.

From behind her, Angel made a throat-clearing sound.

Spike, who'd been staring at Buffy half-hypnotized while her hands were on his belt buckle, promptly broke eye contact and craned his head around to glare at Angel.

"Nice going bringing the two-seater, genius," he jeered. "Where's Buffy going to sit?"

"She'll sit on your lap," Angel said flatly. "You got a problem with that?" As an afterthought, he shot a glance at Buffy. "You think you can fit?" he asked her in a reflexively softer tone of voice.

Buffy opened her mouth, and then closed it again. Angel wanted her to sit on Spike's lap. Okay, well, that was about the only practical solution here. Best to just get in the car and not think about it, get home and figure out what she was going to do then.

Resolve firmly in place, Buffy gingerly slid a foot into the car, and clambered over Spike's body, trying to find a workable position.

"Is this all right?" Buffy asked Spike as she wedged herself on top of him lying partly on her side, one of her legs thrown over both of his, her jeans-covered butt jutting out into the empty air space over the stick shift.

"Works for me," he said, and slid an arm around her waist, hugging her to him. It was a little more intimate a gesture than she felt really comfortable with in Angel's presence, but she couldn't bring herself to complain about it, given the circumstances.

The door on their side of the car slammed shut. There was brief silence as Angel walked around to the other side.

"Am I too heavy for you?" she whispered. She shifted slightly, trying to get comfortable, and let her head settle into the crook of his shoulder.

"Never," he murmured, and then he lifted his chin so her forehead was pressing into the side of his neck. The close quarters in the car made her viewpoint fairly restricted--aside from a narrow slice of the windshield all that was in her field of vision was Spike's chest and legs, both swamped under his currently too-loose clothes.

Behind her, Buffy heard the driver's side door open, and Angel settle himself into his seat. Leather rustled and creaked, mechanical sounds heralded the sudden roaring of the engine, and she let out a breath she hadn't even realized she'd been holding.

"Where to?" Angel asked.

"My place, I guess," Buffy said, speaking into Spike's shirt.

Angel grunted an affirmative and then Buffy felt something brush firmly against her ass. Her eyes widened.

"Sorry," Angel said then. "It's just, ah, I need to work the stick shift. It's... a little tight in here."

"That's... okay," Buffy said through her teeth, trying to curl herself in closer to Spike. "Let's just... get going." She felt Spike's arm tighten around her waist as if in answer, and she felt very glad at that moment she couldn't see his face. She had an uneasy feeling that the two men were glaring at each other over the top of her head.

Angel moved the stick a couple more times. The engine growled and purred in response. Buffy tried not to make a sound, closed her eyes.

"Sorry," Angel said again, and shifted into drive.

The car peeled out with a roar.

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Date: 2004-11-19 11:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bogwitch.livejournal.com
Hee. Angel must be seething!

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Date: 2004-11-20 01:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
Oh, he's seething alright. Next chapter I'll get into why.

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Date: 2004-11-19 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jwaneeta.livejournal.com
Spike let his head fall back, curly hair draped over Angel's leather-clad arm. "Oh, right," he said thickly, regarding Angel through unfocused eyes.

Sahwoon. *thud*

Oh, sorry. Spuffy. It's a Spuffy story. It's about Spike/Buffy. Swooning over the fraught chemistry between Spike and Angel is superfluous. I know that.

But thanks. :D

Cheers all around: to Angel for his timely and exceedingly manhunkish assistance, to Spike for finding the strength to struggle about the seatbelt (must. not. swoon), and to Buffy for at least putting a proprietary arm or two around Spike. Everyone's acting quite adult, all things considered.

I like the offhand, work-a-day vibe between Spike and Angel. Mishaps and late night rescues are probably commonplace in their current line of work, and Buffy's the one who's not part of the routine:

Spike was in no shape to be trading insults with Angel, and she felt oddly out of place, unable to really get a word in.

Nice dynamic.

Ouch, two years? Poor Spike!

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Date: 2004-11-20 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
Ah, you have just done so much to put my mind at rest. (relieved sigh) Between worrying about getting Buffy's reactions just so and my own less than deft hand at implied slash, I was certain that whole thing really wasn't working. But hooray, all the bells seem to be ringing correctly!

I dearly love your description of Angel as "manhunkish." I don't think I've ever seen that used as an adjective before. It's so wonderfully appropriate to dear ol' Angel.

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Date: 2004-11-20 08:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jwaneeta.livejournal.com
I dearly love your description of Angel as "manhunkish." I don't think I've ever seen that used as an adjective before. It's so wonderfully appropriate to dear ol' Angel.

Oh, I just make these things up when there is a terribly CHASTE BUT INCREDIBLY SEXY SUBTEXT going forward. And all kinds of emotional complications to look forward to. :)

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Date: 2004-11-20 12:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] petzipellepingo.livejournal.com
Two years in a hell dimension. Eeek! Poor Spikey, no wonder he's gotten so thin and disoriented.
Angel must be about ready to blow his top watching Buffy sit in Spike's lap. Can't wait until they get back to Buffy's place.

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Date: 2004-11-19 11:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paratti.livejournal.com
Loving it. Poor Spike.

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Date: 2004-11-20 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you. I do try not to torture him too much...
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Date: 2004-11-20 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
asdkfjaskldfoiusadoifu

How'd that go again? I think that sudden fever's gettin' to you! ; )

d00d, you wrote hot fic without any sex in it. How'd you do that?

Load it up with plot-necessary gropeage and too-small spaces... only that was actually what was getting me worried about this one. I thought it was getting a little too... oh, obvious. You know, with the stick shift and all (subtle, that's me!). But if it's working anyway, then hey! I'm happy!

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Date: 2004-11-20 12:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/secrethistory_/
Brilliant. I really enjoyed the way the relationships were drawn between the characters. The interaction of the three felt very believable.

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Date: 2004-11-20 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you. I'm finally starting to relax now. : )

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Date: 2004-11-20 12:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kassto.livejournal.com
Practical, funny, touching and sexy. Yes, all those things. Can't see anything there for you to stress about!

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Date: 2004-11-20 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
Whee! So glad. Thank you.

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Date: 2004-11-23 03:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kassto.livejournal.com
Oh, and I meant to say, re your last chapter, that vamps are SUCH poseurs -- turning up to the rescue in some sexy little sportscar, when really, it'd be much more sensible for active duty to have a van or a truck like Gunn used to have in the old days. But then, of course, you couldn't have all that lap-sitting and gear stick shifting, so it suited your purposes as well!

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Date: 2004-11-23 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
It's true, dear, dear Angel never has been one for practical choices in cars. A convertible. I mean, really. Although then there's Spike with his motorcyle, so he's hardly one to talk either.

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Date: 2004-11-20 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tesla321.livejournal.com
I like how matter-of-fact Angel is, roaring up with the two-seater, and then telling Buffy to sit on Spike's lap! :and I would never tell an author how to write, no, never, but I'm raising my eyes to heaven and hoping that Angel is neither pouty nor love-lorn but continues to be matter-of-fact:

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Date: 2004-11-20 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
Oh, totally feel free to tell me how to write. I never would have finished "Dirty Back Road" if Toys hadn't stepped in to tell me how to write it (which is how I discovered that the boy actually has a larger schmoop streak in him than I have). If I disagree, I'll just do my own thing anyway, but I'd never say no to the suggestions.

Anyway, I can lay your mind to rest about one thing, anyway - yep, Angel is indeed very much mister matter-of-fact right now. He's got plans. Big plans. Things happening. And my next challenge is to figure out how to have him explain them and make it not-tedious.

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Date: 2004-11-20 02:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tesla321.livejournal.com
:grins: I have that huge weakness in this fandom, that Angel-shaped weakness. And you're nicer than I am, because I am more a lawyer than a poet, and I get all "the hell?" to suggestions. Even excellent suggestions; it's an ego thang.

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Date: 2004-11-20 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladywenham.livejournal.com
A year or two? Oh wow ... poor Spike!

Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

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Date: 2004-11-20 02:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
I figured a couple of years of hellish starvation would at least give him that much more in common with Angel for them to talk about. Not that I'm cruel or anything. ; )

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Date: 2004-11-20 01:15 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] herself_nyc
Hee hee.

But how I'd like to be in Buffy's seat!

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Date: 2004-11-20 02:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
Those sporty cars are just undeniably cozy.

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Date: 2004-11-20 02:56 am (UTC)
ext_2333: "That's right,  people, I am a constant surprise." (Default)
From: [identity profile] makd.livejournal.com
wonderfully done chapter! I love the implied slash and Angel's hand on the gear shift (teeheehee; I really am 12.) and Buffy's discomfort with both of them present, and the whole visual of this happening in the street. And Angel: pissed off with Spike for cutting it too close in time and still concerned.
love, love, love this.

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Date: 2004-11-21 03:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
Ooh, thanky. And obviously I'm 12 too, since I wrote it that way. ; )

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Date: 2004-11-20 03:11 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] auroramama
Too beat to write proper feedback but just wanted you know know that this is too tasty for words.

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Date: 2004-11-21 03:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
Thank you And I certainly don't mind the brief feedback! As long as you're enjoying. : )

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Date: 2004-11-20 03:34 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lynnenne
Gah! The sexual tension is palpable in this chapter. And not just because Buffy is sitting in Spike's lap. The closed in space of the car, the banter between Angel and Spike, Buffy's bewilderment at their relationship, her awkwardness with both of them... it's all just too tasty for words. And the snark! I love this:

How'd you know it was a hunn'erd years anyway? Bring a digital watch?

Hee! Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: 2004-11-21 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
Sexual tension, mmmmm. I do love it so. : )

Plenty more snark to come, too. I'll hurry along the next chapter as fast as I can.

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Date: 2004-11-20 03:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lordshiva.livejournal.com
But - but- but - That's all! Wah!

I'm so greedy. Why were you worried about it? Handled brilliantly I think. Tension, confusion. She's on Spike's lap. It's all okay by me.

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Date: 2004-11-21 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
It is a short chapter - sorry! Future ones will be longer. I just had to put this part up and make myself move along before I got too mired in indecision. I seem to be a very difficult critic on my own work.

Thanks so much for the words of support! "Handled brilliantly," she says. Now you're gonna make me blush and stuff...

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Date: 2004-11-20 06:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skylee.livejournal.com
Just found this and read the previous parts, and am completely hooked. ;-)

Ouch, one or two years starved in the dimension? Poor Spike! I love the dynamic between the three of them too, feels very real. ::waits for next chapter::

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Date: 2004-11-21 03:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
Hah hah, I've got you hooked! (evil laughter)

Thanks so much!

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Date: 2004-11-20 07:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] elisi
I have NO time today, but I just had to read this! I liked muchly and think that important moments are often very ordinary and awkward in real life, so this all rang very true! Well done!

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Date: 2004-11-21 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you - that's so what I wanted here, the ordinary awkward moment that's important, but... also not. Well, that plus the funny sexual tension...

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Date: 2004-11-22 08:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toysdream.livejournal.com
The Hook has asked that I preface my comments by mentioning that my immediate verbal reaction to this chapter was "Gee, honey, you just spent an entire chapter getting three people into a car. Let's hope they don't have to stop for gas!" So perhaps you now understand the cross she has to bear as she grapples with her writerly chores. :-)

On the other hand: Mmmmm, Angel. This should be a non-stop funfest!

I'm charmed that Buffy's immediate reaction is to start fretting about how they're going to start fighting over her, because of course that's the kind of thing that always used to happen, and then she finds herself just tagging along for the ride while the guys trade zingers over her head. Poor Buffy - so much has changed during her little vacation from the superhero biz.

And yes, the banter. Not that it'd be easy to tell on brain trust here, How'd you know it was a hunn'erd years anyway? Bring a digital watch?... classic. Not to mention the visual image of Buffy wiggling into the car and butting in while Angel's trying to get Spike wrapped up all nice and snug, and then the lap-sitting and stick-shifting. Oh my! You always make vehicular travel seem so dirty.

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Date: 2004-11-22 09:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
I do have this thing with cars that I hadn't even noticed until you pointed it out. The next chapter of "The Dead Walk" is gonna start right out with more car issues too... hm. Maybe I should rewrite that. Although they are in L.A. in that story, and what does one do there other than drive?

Buffy does jump to conclusions pretty quickly about Angel and Spike, but she's been, as you've observed, out of the loop, so really has no idea how much things have changed in her absence. That's going to be a bit more of an adjustment than she realizes, I think.

Glad you like the banter. It's been the most fun so far in this story to write - I mean, I enjoyed, if you could call it that, writing the Buffy/Spike argument back in Chapter 3 or so, but that was tough going compared to Angel vs. Spike fun stuff. That's just an outright joy.

Not to mention the visual image of Buffy wiggling into the car and butting in while Angel's trying to get Spike wrapped up all nice and snug

And you say I make things sound dirty!

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Date: 2004-11-22 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toysdream.livejournal.com
Like you said, it's all about the cars in L.A. If anything, there was never enough driving in the TV show. From one side of the city to the other via sewer? Yeah, right!

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Date: 2004-11-28 11:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lillianmorgan.livejournal.com
Hehehehehehehehehehe! This was wonderfully awkward and funny - not sure who I'm cheering for - Angel, Buffy or Spike! :)

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Date: 2004-12-05 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
It's okay to cheer for all of them at once - I know I kind of am.

Whoops, that sounded dirty, didn't it? ; )

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Date: 2004-12-05 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spikefan.livejournal.com
I cannot believe that I neglected to comment on this when it went up. My life has been eaten alive by school lately, so I'm thinking this was one of my increasingly frequent "hit and run" fic-reading visits. I went back to read this today before going on to Chapter 10, poked around to see what I'd said in the comments, and...nothing.

*hangs head in shame*

Buffy blinked. She'd zoned out for a second, hadn't seen Angel approach, and now he was right in front of her. The three of them formed a little triangle in the middle of the dimly lit street.

That was a lovely little gem. I so enjoyed the three way tension in this chapter. Heh, I said "three way".

"Nice going bringing the two-seater, genius," he jeered. "Where's Buffy going to sit?"
"She'll sit on your lap," Angel said flatly. "You got a problem with that?"


Hee hee! Wasn't that clever of Spike to get Angel to assign the seating? It's also great --and dead-on characterization-- that Spike is willing to use his last ounce of energy to rile Angel. (How I struggled with that last sentence: "get a rise out of Angel", "give Angel a hard time", "get under Angel's skin." How on earth could I say it without sounding downright filthy?)

Not only do you make getting into a car hot, but your words sounded as if Angel and Spike just thought them up in the heat of the moment while you were off somewhere writing.

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Date: 2004-12-07 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thedeadlyhook.livejournal.com
I cannot believe that I neglected to comment on this when it went up.

Not to worry. I know how hectic things get. If it's any consolation, I've felt equally bad about keeping everyone waiting this long between chapters after Thanksgiving!

That was a lovely little gem. I so enjoyed the three way tension in this chapter. Heh, I said "three way".

I absolutely couldn't resist playing up that aspect of their relationship just a teensy, especially since we have Buffy on record as thinking about two of them that way.

Hee hee! Wasn't that clever of Spike to get Angel to assign the seating? It's also great --and dead-on characterization-- that Spike is willing to use his last ounce of energy to rile Angel. (How I struggled with that last sentence: "get a rise out of Angel", "give Angel a hard time", "get under Angel's skin." How on earth could I say it without sounding downright filthy?)

The Angel and Spike show is indeed the big fun to write. And not the least because their banter just helps to fuel our dirty, dirty minds. ; )

Not only do you make getting into a car hot, but your words sounded as if Angel and Spike just thought them up in the heat of the moment while you were off somewhere writing.

A greater compliment I can't imagine! Thank you.

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