ext_7207 ([identity profile] lillianmorgan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thedeadlyhook 2005-08-22 12:44 pm (UTC)

Sometimes the 'oh's and the 'wow's say so much :)
Loved this; wonderful banter between Dawn and Buffy. Dawn can tease Buffy til the cows come home with such effortless wit, but the moment she oversteps the mark it's all wonderful tenderness and concern.
he said 'bugger Angel,' whatever that means,
Heh! Laughed out loud at that one. Just as well Dr Freud isn't reading ;)
Well, I, um, I figure... the whole reason I even exist is because other people took care of me.
::big sniffles::
soulless Angelus, running around in L.A. while they'd been busy fighting The First. And no one had even thought to tell her.
REALLY? ::rols eyes::
Loved to see how Dawn had matured in this; and Buffy was perfect. Her lack of perceptive reaction to Spike and Angel's relationship, lead more to how they, or more particularly, Spike could be used by W&H. There's always comedy to be had out of Buffy in her singlemindedness, but you turned it into something positive for her, because she used her strategising and her gut reaction to come up with an answer to the riddle.
Looking forward to more.

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