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herself_nyc ([personal profile] herself_nyc) wrote in [personal profile] thedeadlyhook 2006-05-03 01:42 pm (UTC)

You're so good at the snappy dialogue, and I like how the snappy dialogue gives way to the big emotional moment, where they realize that this is about more than it's apparently about.

Can't wait for the rest.

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