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herself_nyc ([personal profile] herself_nyc) wrote in [personal profile] thedeadlyhook 2007-06-13 05:01 pm (UTC)

Wowee, this is an AMAZING start. Your Xander is completely in voice and character, and I love how effortlessly you're interweaving these disorienting alternate takes on events. I'm intrigued by the "demon"-woman or whoever she is, and I can't wait for more.

Thanks!!
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