I'm pretty darned thrilled that you are having impulses toward the fic, for structural, meta, or any other reasons. It's all good...
Also, if you think you need some inspiration of a more tangible sort, I'm not above plying you with baked goods, and I'm local!
I also have some issues with missing relationship bits in S7. Let me show you them!
1. When, why, HOW does Xander stop with the the Spike antipathy? It's somewhere between Him and Sleeper...but wha--? Some people say he just starts to have faith in Buffy after Selfless, and is keeping mum about his own opinions, but that doesn't scan for me. 2. Spike and Dawn — is there anything after her threat in Beneath You? Anything at all? 3. Dawn's friends Kit & Carlos — Can they please do something? Also the kid who was a friend of Cassie? Dawn is a high school sophomore (ahem, like Buffy in S1), so where's the friends? 4. What makes Giles go all paternalistic party-line guy? Must he? It bugs me. 5. Hey! I wasn't done!
Oh well, I could go on, but I'm sure you already have plenty of stuff that you're planning to focus on. And lo! It will be good!
P.S. I wish I could help with a title, but it's not my strong suit. Let me know if you want a summary at some point, though!
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Also, if you think you need some inspiration of a more tangible sort, I'm not above plying you with baked goods, and I'm local!
I also have some issues with missing relationship bits in S7. Let me show you them!
1. When, why, HOW does Xander stop with the the Spike antipathy? It's somewhere between Him and Sleeper...but wha--? Some people say he just starts to have faith in Buffy after Selfless, and is keeping mum about his own opinions, but that doesn't scan for me.
2. Spike and Dawn — is there anything after her threat in Beneath You? Anything at all?
3. Dawn's friends Kit & Carlos — Can they please do something? Also the kid who was a friend of Cassie? Dawn is a high school sophomore (ahem, like Buffy in S1), so where's the friends?
4. What makes Giles go all paternalistic party-line guy? Must he? It bugs me.
5. Hey! I wasn't done!
Oh well, I could go on, but I'm sure you already have plenty of stuff that you're planning to focus on. And lo! It will be good!
P.S. I wish I could help with a title, but it's not my strong suit. Let me know if you want a summary at some point, though!