ext_13031 ([identity profile] toysdream.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thedeadlyhook 2004-03-20 02:53 pm (UTC)

Don't worry. That's not how we work. All this has honestly been thought out ahead of time.

(Previous comment redacted. Just conferred with the Hook and thought things out ahead of time. :-)

Yeah, I was kinda worried about that. Yes, the idea was that Lorne told him about the fortune-teller off camera, just after he said "you can help these girls"... maybe we should go back and insert a little bit there about a sympathetic shoulder pat and Lorne slipping him a piece of paper with a name and address...

I do love the current ending of chapter two, though. Maybe we can work in a bit of setup exposition in the third installment...

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