Well I could go through all the parts that I loved, but I stick to this section otherwise it'll be like 2 pages long!
one little Blair Witch stick man hee hee hee, that made me giggle!
No white rabbit.
Brought about recollections of The Matrix, follow the white rabbit.
SPIKE! SPIKE! OMG! YAY! How awesome! And he's the same Spike not wussy Spike! Yay!
This is Rutherford Sirk NO! Don't listen! RUNAWAY!
But it is a nice twist!
"High ones?" interjected Kennedy. "Like kings, gods, dopers, what?"
Sirk heaved a weary sigh as we all do whenever Kennedy opens her mouth
In this version, the serpent doesn't die when its body is torn apart.
Well we all knew that TFE wasn't dead, but still, this is scary!!
I really like all of Sirk's telling of the story, it sounds really realistic, like it was something that he had come across in one of their archives.
So then. Let's get on with it," I can really hear Spike saying this in his businesslike tone.
This time he did scream.
All kinds of uh oh!!
Basically, I all kinds of scared about what is going to happen!!
Write more now! I'm on the edge of my seat!