Thank you for the pimpage! This is still kind of a rough work-in-progress for us, so the comments are really helping us tighten up the writing as we go. Because as you can now see, what we're building here is more or less a mystery story, and that takes technique. Or at least dropping the right clues in the right places.... so far, people seem to be picking up on exactly what they're supposed to be asking questions about right now, which is an encouraging sign. Hopefully, we'll be able to pay all this off to everyone's satisfaction. Heh heh heh.
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Thank you for the pimpage! This is still kind of a rough work-in-progress for us, so the comments are really helping us tighten up the writing as we go. Because as you can now see, what we're building here is more or less a mystery story, and that takes technique. Or at least dropping the right clues in the right places.... so far, people seem to be picking up on exactly what they're supposed to be asking questions about right now, which is an encouraging sign. Hopefully, we'll be able to pay all this off to everyone's satisfaction. Heh heh heh.