Toys will be so thrilled when he wakes up. But first, you get me!
Hm. I guess we should make the 'hand that heals' thing more clear, since it has been awhile since that's come up. The Xander-in-the-car stuff... well, the original idea was to recapture the way I saw England for the first time, sort of half-awake in a car. And I insist that there's no real way to shut a car door without slamming it (at least, I've never known any of my family or friends not to do it, no matter if you're asleep or not!).
I really liked Willow's reaction here -- just right, and now all her friends are there, too -- she's going to feel even more exposed
There's gonna be a lot of focus on Willow and the whole magic school thing from here on out. You may notice her trying to be very blase about the whole thing, but she's still got some issues, yes indeedy.
AAAAAGH! Why don't you have her flash her pierced tongue while she's at it?
Hey, it's still Kennedy. She's not the most subtle girl on the planet.
And SUDDENLY S7 GILES MAKES SENSE! ....wow, that was actually v impressive. And just makes sense, too. Nice!
Heh heh heh... wait till you see the next chapter....
When you get this up on the site, you might want to advertise somehow that for folks who like Xander, he has a really good role in this, and excellent characterization. (Not that everyone else isn't well-done too, but the Xander bits are great, esp after the drought on the actual SHOW.)
I'm so glad to hear that Xander is coming off well in this... I'd always felt he had some great issues to explore, and in this fic, he has kinda developed into a really, really important character, so yeah, maybe we will make a point of billing it at the Xander and Willow roadshow. (glows with happiness at Xander praise)
Heh. Maybe they knew it lifted about 30% of her guilt.
Among other things (she says enigmatically).
Buffy wouldn't kill Dawn, now Dawnie returns the favor. V cool.
Yay for symmetry. Or the Golden Rule, if you like.
Plot point! Plot point!
Mwah hah ha... By the way, next chapter will be nearly all plot of this type. I hope you'll be pleasantly surprised.
Re: like the story!
Toys will be so thrilled when he wakes up. But first, you get me!
Hm. I guess we should make the 'hand that heals' thing more clear, since it has been awhile since that's come up. The Xander-in-the-car stuff... well, the original idea was to recapture the way I saw England for the first time, sort of half-awake in a car. And I insist that there's no real way to shut a car door without slamming it (at least, I've never known any of my family or friends not to do it, no matter if you're asleep or not!).
I really liked Willow's reaction here -- just right, and now all her friends are there, too -- she's going to feel even more exposed
There's gonna be a lot of focus on Willow and the whole magic school thing from here on out. You may notice her trying to be very blase about the whole thing, but she's still got some issues, yes indeedy.
AAAAAGH! Why don't you have her flash her pierced tongue while she's at it?
Hey, it's still Kennedy. She's not the most subtle girl on the planet.
And SUDDENLY S7 GILES MAKES SENSE! ....wow, that was actually v impressive. And just makes sense, too. Nice!
Heh heh heh... wait till you see the next chapter....
When you get this up on the site, you might want to advertise somehow that for folks who like Xander, he has a really good role in this, and excellent characterization. (Not that everyone else isn't well-done too, but the Xander bits are great, esp after the drought on the actual SHOW.)
I'm so glad to hear that Xander is coming off well in this... I'd always felt he had some great issues to explore, and in this fic, he has kinda developed into a really, really important character, so yeah, maybe we will make a point of billing it at the Xander and Willow roadshow. (glows with happiness at Xander praise)
Heh. Maybe they knew it lifted about 30% of her guilt.
Among other things (she says enigmatically).
Buffy wouldn't kill Dawn, now Dawnie returns the favor. V cool.
Yay for symmetry. Or the Golden Rule, if you like.
Plot point! Plot point!
Mwah hah ha... By the way, next chapter will be nearly all plot of this type. I hope you'll be pleasantly surprised.