thedeadlyhook

Aw, thank you. I'm still a little unsatisfied with this chapter - it feels like there's a link or two missing, so it may end up being revised at some future date, but I'm glad at least if the gist of it is coming across, that banter-leading-into-serious-discussion idea. For some reason, that's the way I imagine hearing them talk - never starting out in a place, but ending up there.

Hopefully not too much longer for the rest!