Wow this is good. I dug the heck out of take charge Dawn,(even if there was a lot of panic.) and your setting is like another character at this point. Carlos! Alright that was probably too much excitement for that character, but it bugged me that they took the time to introduce that character (and Kat) and literally did nothing else with them. (I think Dawn said Kats' name on the phone once.)
Have I mentioned that I love this, cause that is all i'm thinking right now.
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Date: 2013-09-06 11:32 pm (UTC)Have I mentioned that I love this, cause that is all i'm thinking right now.