¡Yay! I love this fic, and I'm so happy there's more of it!
The overall effect was sort of Haight-Ashbury hippie meets Mr. T.
It took him a moment to find his voice. "Is it Halloween already?"
She shot him a wounded look. "Hello to you too."
Hee! Mostly this chapter is two-way conversations, and they are all nifty. I'm glad that Carlos is being given a bit more importance in this. You know my feelings on the lack of Hispanic residents in the 'Dale. Anyway, he's sounds like a halfway decent teen boy, in that he's only halfway decent. Great job!
P.S. Do you have an AO3 identity? I'm helping Herself get her stuff up over there, and so much of it is dedicated to you that I wanted to tag you, if I could. Just a thought...
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Date: 2014-06-28 07:24 pm (UTC)The overall effect was sort of Haight-Ashbury hippie meets Mr. T.
It took him a moment to find his voice. "Is it Halloween already?"
She shot him a wounded look. "Hello to you too."
Hee! Mostly this chapter is two-way conversations, and they are all nifty. I'm glad that Carlos is being given a bit more importance in this. You know my feelings on the lack of Hispanic residents in the 'Dale. Anyway, he's sounds like a halfway decent teen boy, in that he's only halfway decent. Great job!
P.S. Do you have an AO3 identity? I'm helping Herself get her stuff up over there, and so much of it is dedicated to you that I wanted to tag you, if I could. Just a thought...