Summoning up the courage, as in, rereading stuff and identifying what I like most, becaseu as I said, I just raced through it as fast as I could...I should make notes, I guess. Off the top of my head: awesome plotting. I love a good, well thought out plot, and I appreciate the effort that goes into it (as i'm unable to do more than create tables and leave them mostly empty - you may have noticed my lack of forethought). Characterization: You have managed to paint in the OC's very creditably- this sounds kind of lukewar, I know, but even though I liked their role in this fic, and it's much much better than ME managed, I still wouldn't read a novel only about them...Great Willow and Xander. Oops. My daughter is coming to collect her computer time. More later.
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Date: 2004-05-31 05:49 pm (UTC)Off the top of my head: awesome plotting. I love a good, well thought out plot, and I appreciate the effort that goes into it (as i'm unable to do more than create tables and leave them mostly empty - you may have noticed my lack of forethought).
Characterization: You have managed to paint in the OC's very creditably- this sounds kind of lukewar, I know, but even though I liked their role in this fic, and it's much much better than ME managed, I still wouldn't read a novel only about them...Great Willow and Xander.
Oops. My daughter is coming to collect her computer time. More later.