Okay, I understand absolutely the need to change one's mind about how a story goes. Can't properly recall specifics any more now, but I liked it best right up to the point where Spike drove away. The episodic nature of it after that seemed like a rush finish job, yeah. As though you had planned to cover several more episodes, but just wanted to get it over with.
So take your time to make it what you want. Only do it soon. *eg*
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Date: 2004-09-14 03:38 am (UTC)I was formulating a comment, too.
Okay, I understand absolutely the need to change one's mind about how a story goes. Can't properly recall specifics any more now, but I liked it best right up to the point where Spike drove away. The episodic nature of it after that seemed like a rush finish job, yeah. As though you had planned to cover several more episodes, but just wanted to get it over with.
So take your time to make it what you want. Only do it soon. *eg*