This is brilliant! Have you thought of a name for your universe yet? And I loved the pocket dimension! This is the sort of thing that fits in perfectly! Squee! And the whole time-thing actually reminded me first and foremost of Narnia - the children always come back to the real world moments after they left, but sometimes centuries have passed between their visits!
I'm now really looking forward to more of 'The Dead Walk', since it ties in with this story directly (I thought it might, but wasn't sure) and also since Angel obviously reappears at some point.
And have I said how much I love your writing? You manage to describe things beautifully without making it overly long.
Another thing I admired was how you managed to get Buffy to begin to understand how much Spike has changed. All her thoughts about his crypt etc - very, very good.
I'm running out of superlatives here, so I better stop. Looking forward to what ever comes next! :)
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Date: 2004-10-28 12:13 pm (UTC)I'm now really looking forward to more of 'The Dead Walk', since it ties in with this story directly (I thought it might, but wasn't sure) and also since Angel obviously reappears at some point.
And have I said how much I love your writing? You manage to describe things beautifully without making it overly long.
Another thing I admired was how you managed to get Buffy to begin to understand how much Spike has changed. All her thoughts about his crypt etc - very, very good.
I'm running out of superlatives here, so I better stop. Looking forward to what ever comes next! :)