BTW, I meant to mention that the rewrite was really, really good. As a reader, I can actually visualise myself in their positions; whereas before it was a bit like they were trying to explain and justify them to me. I've got all sorts of plans for where we go next. Heh heh heh. (rubs hands) This is of the definite good! :)
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Date: 2004-12-19 04:59 pm (UTC)I've got all sorts of plans for where we go next. Heh heh heh. (rubs hands)
This is of the definite good! :)