This Always Happens

On bleary-eyed morning re-read, I've decided I'm still not totally happy with the last chapter of "Does It Have to Mean Something?" and it needs more work. (Kind of like the typos you can't see until something is printed, I usually find my biggest arguments with character voice after I've posted, sigh.) So an alert to those following that story - I'm not going to take down the old version, since there are comments on it, but there will be changes made, probably sometime later today. If you've already read it, here's your chance for a rare before-and-after from me; if you haven't, you might want to wait for the bug-fix in Ver. 2.0.

For the curious, here's what bugged me. ( Spoilery If You Haven't Read the Chapter )

Dirty Back Road Sequel, Part 12 REVISED

Okay. Take Two. This one's about twice as long as the previous version because once these two start up with their arguing, you just can't shut them up. Much happier with this one. I'll leave the old version up for the time being, just for fun contrast, but this chapter replaces that one. Previous chapters here. ( Does It Have to Mean Something? Chapter 12 )